Saturday 5 September 2015

Futureristic Story

Futureristic Story-Iman Afiq
              Bob a normal man, he was a police officer and wishes to be a detective ever since thugs killed his parents in 2020 on mars. One day his commanding officer wanted to call detectives in a murder case to collect evidence but all his detectives were on duty. So Bob decided to ask his permission to gather the evidence, at first his commanding officer said no but he knew he had no choice so he told Bob to find the murder weapon and any bullets in the murder. Bob went into his flying police vechile and found the body of the victim he search the corpse he felt weird because he felt that he has seen this murderway before but he cant quite remember. He found a blaster that cointan almost 4 laser shots left he took the evidence and gave it to his commanding officer. His commanding officer was suprised and told Bob that he would get a promotion to become a detective, Bob was very happy he said to himself 'after two years it has been worth it'. The next day after the evidence was scanned the muder weapon belong to Falcon. Bob was shocked he would always remember Falcon was his father murderer. Instantly Bob wanted to take the case he found out that he was hiding at an old abanddon warehouse he went in with a few police officer and found Falcon holding a plasma rifle he started to shoot at every police he saw Bob was smart he flank Falcon by the back and knock him out. He was proud of himself not just for putting the murderer of his father in prison but also making mars one step closer to humanity.


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2 comments:

  1. Please check for grammar errors. Lots of them.

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  2. After reading it properly, I realise I still don't quite get it. :(

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